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我过去很软弱，很害羞。

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我不喜欢运动。

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我经常感到疲倦和悲伤。

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story: What happened? Who was in the story?

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一天，一位老师鼓励我。

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他让我每天早上跑步。

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我开始奔跑。这很难，但我没有放弃。

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我每天跑步很长一段时间。

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feelings: It made me … I got to know...

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现在，我坚强而快乐。

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我知道努力工作会让我变得更好。

我过去很软弱，很害羞。我不喜欢运动。我经常感到疲倦和悲伤。
一天，一位老师鼓励我。他让我每天早上跑步。我开始奔跑。这很难，但我没有放弃。我每天跑步很长一段时间。
现在，我坚强而快乐。我知道努力工作会让我变得更好。

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I was weak and shy in the past.

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I didn't like sports.

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tired, sad

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I often felt tired and sad.

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teacher, encourage

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One day, a teacher encouraged me.

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tell, run

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He told me to run every morning.

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start

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I started to run.

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hard, give up

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It was hard, but I didn't give up.

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every day, long time

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I ran every day for a long time.

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strong, happy

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Now, I am strong and happy.

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know, make, better

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I know hard work makes me better.

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I often felt tired and sad.
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One day, a teacher encouraged me.He told me to run every morning.
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I started to run.It was hard, but I didn't give up.
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I ran every day for a long time.
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Now, I am strong and happy.
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I know hard work makes me better.
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基础分：I was weak and shy in the past.I didn't like sports. I often felt tired and sad. One day, a teacher encouraged me.He told me to run every morning. I started to run.It was hard, but I didn't give up.I ran every day for a long time.Now, I am strong and happy.I know hard work makes me better.

良好分：I used to be weak and shy, and I didn't like sports at all.Because I didn't exercise, I often felt tired and sad, which made me very upset.One day, my PE teacher encouraged me a lot and told me to run every morning.So I started to run, and I never gave up even when I felt very tired.After months of hard practice, I changed a lot.Now I am much stronger and more confident than before.From this experience, I learn that hard work can make one a better person.
优秀分：I used to be a sluggish and introverted person, lacking physical strength and the courage to interact with others, which held me back from growing.This unfavorable state not only damaged my health but also lowered my confidence, which made me determined to make a change.
Consequently, I took up running under the encouragement of my PE teacher, who guided me to develop a healthy habit.Despite the exhaustion and pain in the initial stage, I persisted diligently day by day.I have become more energetic and confident, and my mood has also become much brighter.
This precious experience teaches me that persistence is the key to success. No matter how difficult it is, as long as I keep trying, I can become a better me.